Confessional Classic: 3 Tips to Make Your Writing Stronger

The PLC is on vacation, please to be enjoying some of our favorite posts from the vault. Happy Holidays!

This week’s 3 Things… theme is 3 Things I wish I’d known then. Here are three pieces of advice on writing I wish I had understood as a wee moppet with 12 point Courier twinkling in my eyes.


Cutting is Not Losing. You write your novel. You print it, read it, and realize something doesn’t work. An entire subplot doesn’t work. Maybe 10,000 whole words don’t work.

I used to cling to those smelly scenes, unable to “waste” my work by such merciless cutting. But here’s the thing:  Serious cutting doesn’t make your work disappear. Every word you write is a step in the right direction. Every word you write makes you a better writer. Being able to see that something doesn’t work just means you’re a better writer now than you were when you first wrote that storyline. Cutting 10,000 words that don’t work isn’t a loss. It’s a gain.


Take Tiny Bites. Writing a novel, revising a novel, these are huge projects. They can be overwhelming. And when you have a lot of work on your plate, it can send you into a tailspin.

I used to let the sheer enormity of my own ambition overwhelm me, sending me straight into writer’s-block-land. But I have found if I tighten the scope of what I need to do on any given day, my project becomes much less intimidating. Don’t worry about the next 50,000 words. Only worry about the next scene. One scene a day. Start with that, and you’ll find yourself doing more.

Don’t Use The First Idea. This advice came to me from the incomparable Jim Sallis. Once I really understood it, it became one of the most valuable pieces of writing advice I have ever received. Our first impulse is often generic. So don’t use it. I’m not talking about those brilliant-gut flashes you get, I’m talking about everyday writing-work.

Here’s an example:

One of the characters in my current work in progress is a servant. She was caught doing something wrong and was to be punished by her master. I thought I would have her whipped. Because when I did something very wrong as a child I would get a spanking.

I started to write the scene. As I wrote I realized a whipping would be boring. Everyday. So I stopped. I thought about my setting (a bedroom), thought about the disciplinarian (a power-hungry sadist), and I thought about my servant and what would hurt her the most. What I wrote instead of the whipping surprised me. It wasn’t obvious. It made me sick to my stomach afterward.

And every time I read that scene now, I get chills.

So what about you? What do you know now as a writer that you wish you’d known then? I’d love to hear it.


Be Prepared to Submit!

Sounds, uh, colorful, doesn’t it? I also toyed with the idea of naming this post “Spread em!” but I figured Amy Nichols and S.C. Green would probably hunt me down with those mutant wolveloceraptors they’ve been breeding in the secret subbasement of the Hotel San Carlos.  (Pro tip: Don’t go down there.)

What this post is really about, though, is researching markets and using Excel to track your story submissions. Yes I know that’s MUCH less exciting, but it is very useful. You can organize your spreadsheets any way you want, here’s how I do mine:

FOR SHORT STORIES

So you wrote a story. Now you gotta send it somewhere, right? Better dig up some market listings. As I only write SFFH, I like Ralan for listings, as they are organized by pay rate. When I have a story ready to market, I always pop over there— are there any new anthologies that my story might be a fit for? Is one of my target markets currently closed to submissions? Is someone doing a theme issue? Once I’ve sussed out at least three or four places that look like a good fit for my story, I pop open my Excel spreadsheet, aptly named SUB TRACKER, and click on the first tab, which is my short fiction tracker. My columns are labeled thusly:

STORY TITLE/SUB DATE/SENT TO/SEND NEXT TO

I try to always have at least 3 more markets lined up, so if/when the story comes winging back my way, I can send it back out into the world that same day. Why?

Catching your story on the rebound is key to avoid emotional wallowing. And of course as I am prepping my cover letter I pop over to the next market’s website to make sure nothing has changed since the last time I checked out their submissions page. Market needs change every day, it’s best to make sure you are armed with the most current information possible.

NOVELS

The second tab on my spreadsheet is for agents. Agent Query is a great place to glean info— so is the back page of your favorite paperback, where the writer you adore likely graciously thanked her beloved agent. I open up a Word doc and make a list of prospective agents, and then go look at all their websites and figure out if they would be a good fit for me. Then I open up the next tab in my spreadsheet and fill in the following info.

AGENT/SUBMISSION REQUESTS/IN AAR?/CONTACT INFO/AVERAGE RESPONSE TIMES/ALSO REPS/REJECTED OR REQUESTED?/REASON FOR REJECTION?/OTHER TIPS

Agent (name) sub req (what they want) contact info (where to send it) and so on are pretty self-explanatory. This weekend I decided to add in the “Average Response Times” category, and it saved my butt— although we writers spend a lot of time bellyaching about waiting on agents, I found that most of the agents I’m eyeballing turn around queries in a month or less. That meant that my current plan of querying on the novel I am not quite finished revising was pretty effin’ dumb. Some of these guys request on the same day! What if that actually happened— I’d be screwed! So, it was a good thing to research.

“Other Tips” is where I put my stalking info— tidbits I’ve gleaned through blog posts, twitter, and online interviews of any pickiness, pet peeve, or preference that I might use to advantage in crafting my personalized query letter to a particular prospective agent.

So, if you’re getting ready to submit, make sure you are prepared! Track where your story/novel goes, make sure you’re up to date on the demands of the market, and enable yourself to bounce that story right back out into the big bad world when it comes back to you.

Scar *always* reads his MSs out loud. (I wish he'd read mine out loud.)

Oh and one last thing, ALWAYS print out your story AND cover letter and read it over OUT LOUD before you send anywhere. I don’t care if it’s an e-sub. Print out and read your work and you WILL catch embarrassing mistakes, I promise. I almost mailed a story to “BA” instead of “VA” last week. Ugh. No Birginia, there is no Santa Claus. So be prepared.

New Year’s Goals: Do you even remember them?

Back in January I set goals for the year. In years past, I set very specific goals: finish novel, save money for a new house, train dog to eat the neighbor’s flowers, et cetera. Most of which I failed to accomplish by the end of December.

Cue the pity party music and drolling woe-is-mes. You know, all those things that make a person unbearable to be around. And the party rages on until I reset the cycle by setting new goals. See the pattern?

This year I took a new approach and focused on three words, Fortitude, Adaptability, and Follow-through. The way I figured it, as long as I kept those three words in the forefront of my thoughts, it would positively effect my daily life. Everything I accomplish would be pluses, and the lack of specificity would make it almost impossible to fail.

Here’s how it’s going so far.

My fortitude faltered somewhere around the beginning of summer. The evil bastard part of my brain that speaks harsh words and untruths had nearly convinced me to throw in the writing towel. There was no time for this hobby of mine, it would say. By the end of summer my fortitude strengthened and I found my way back to pen and paper, the evil bastard properly bound and gagged. My output is back up, and there is no question that I intend to write through to my grave day.

That’s right about the same time my adaptability kicked in and had me bending about like a master Yogi. I had to create ways to get writing time. Set small goals, in lieu of large ones. Carve out new writing digs. Dust off old ones. It boiled down to being satisfied with multiple small output periods (SOP) a day and one or two large output periods (LOP) a week. I used to balk at SOPs, figuring they didn’t do me any good. The math shows otherwise. Four SOPs a day at 100-150 words yields between 400-600 words a day versus the alternative to not write at all. Four hundred is more than zero. So long story short (too late), I sucked it up and now do SOPs.

My first real act of follow-through came late this year. A novel isn’t finished after the first draft, or even after light revisions. It comes after weeks and months of cutting, rewriting, deleting, pasting back in, five empty bottles of scotch, and a plethora of paper cuts. So I cracked open my first manuscript and attacked with red ink. It looked a bloody mess and still does. I won’t lie. It’s like pulling teeth. Sans the Novocaine. Those are the moments I look to the future, to the pretty polished manuscript you’d never guess needed braces. In the end, it’ll all be worth it.

That’s my track so far. Good and bad, but making it through. How are your New Year’s resolutions holding up? Let me know in the comments below. I’d love to cheer your successes as well as commiserate any set backs. I for one have had them both.

Don’t get in your own way: staying goal-oriented through depression

Please note: while I do suffer bouts of depression, my milady is mild enough that most of my life I have confused it with ennui, apathy, or laziness. I do not take medication (although I consider it sometimes). If you’re reading this and are suffering moderate or serious depression, please speak with a professional to assess whether medication may be right for you. True medical depression is not something you can just “snap out of” no matter what your mother says.

My New Year’s Resolution, strictly speaking, was to keep a daily diary. The diary was to keep me on track towards my plethora of resolutions, listed in a Word Doc I called “28 Days Later”, so named because my vow was to try to make several changes for one month… and then either abandon or modify what wasn’t working and consciously decide to re-commit to my goals for another month.

But as time went on, I didn’t need the paper diary anymore- what I needed was simply to check in with myself once every other week or so- and so I ended up using my 28 Days Later file for that. I write about my successes and failures, and I analyze my current mindset to gauge whether my feelings are related to my progress or not. This second part is particularly important for me as I have discovered I am often moderately depressed in the midst of success. I just don’t give myself credit for my accomplishments, and that is something for me to work on.

It turns out that being aware of the incongruity between my mood and my achievements is key to staying on track and not falling into a writer’s block or other self-destructive behaviors.

My depression is pretty mild, and that is what makes it insidious. Usually I don’t even know I’m in a funk until I realize I’ve been wearing the same pajama pants for three days straight. Regular self-reflection has kept me from falling into this trap.

How am I doing on my 28 Days Later goals? Well, I wanted to lose 90 pounds, and so far I have lost 60. I wanted to have 3 stories in the mail at all times, and right now I have 2. Smaller goals, such as eating at least one vegetable every day, going to bed at 10 pm, getting dressed every morning (don’t laugh, that’s seriously important for your mental health if you work from home), and other such things have become automatic. So am I “there” yet? Hell no. Am I slowly transforming into the person I want to be? Hell yes.

So, here’s the takeaway: if you’ve got personal goals you want to achieve but are having a hard time staying on track, list out your goals in writing. Revisit them daily. Write about your progress, your setbacks, and your feelings, and note when your feelings don’t jibe with your progress. Forgive yourself for failure, because there will be failure on any path to success, and recommit to your goals. Recognize your own achievements. Modify the goals that aren’t working for you, and set new goals to keep moving forward.

3 Tips to Make Your Writing Stronger

This week’s 3 Things… theme is 3 Things I wish I’d known then. Here are three pieces of advice on writing I wish I had understood as a wee moppet with 12 point Courier twinkling in my eyes.


Cutting is Not Losing. You write your novel. You print it, read it, and realize something doesn’t work. An entire subplot doesn’t work. Maybe 10,000 whole words don’t work.

I used to cling to those smelly scenes, unable to “waste” my work by such merciless cutting. But here’s the thing:  Serious cutting doesn’t make your work disappear. Every word you write is a step in the right direction. Every word you write makes you a better writer. Being able to see that something doesn’t work just means you’re a better writer now than you were when you first wrote that storyline. Cutting 10,000 words that don’t work isn’t a loss. It’s a gain.


Take Tiny Bites. Writing a novel, revising a novel, these are huge projects. They can be overwhelming. And when you have a lot of work on your plate, it can send you into a tailspin.

I used to let the sheer enormity of my own ambition overwhelm me, sending me straight into writer’s-block-land. But I have found if I tighten the scope of what I need to do on any given day, my project becomes much less intimidating. Don’t worry about the next 50,000 words. Only worry about the next scene. One scene a day. Start with that, and you’ll find yourself doing more.

Don’t Use The First Idea. This advice came to me from the incomparable Jim Sallis. Once I really understood it, it became one of the most valuable pieces of writing advice I have ever received. Our first impulse is often generic. So don’t use it. I’m not talking about those brilliant-gut flashes you get, I’m talking about everyday writing-work.

Here’s an example:

One of the characters in my current work in progress is a servant. She was caught doing something wrong and was to be punished by her master. I thought I would have her whipped. Because when I did something very wrong as a child I would get a spanking.

I started to write the scene. As I wrote I realized a whipping would be boring. Everyday. So I stopped. I thought about my setting (a bedroom), thought about the disciplinarian (a power-hungry sadist), and I thought about my servant and what would hurt her the most. What I wrote instead of the whipping surprised me. It wasn’t obvious. It made me sick to my stomach afterward.

And every time I read that scene now, I get chills.

So what about you? What do you know now as a writer that you wish you’d known then? I’d love to hear it.

Tomorrow’s Guest Spot Tuesday at the PLC: an interview with Alan DeNiro, author of Total Oblivion, More or Less and Skinny Dipping in the Lake of the Dead.

I Want A Dream Agent, So I Don’t Have To Dream Alone

It’s confession week, and that means time for us PLCers to recap what we’ve been up to, writing-wise, for the month. I’ve finally finished my revisions on The Iron Key and gotten everything out to my betas. Since then, I’ve rested on my laurels.

What I should have been doing is going through my back issues of Locus and trolling through the sales section for agents. (If you want to know what’s going on in the speculative fiction neck of the publishing world, a subscription to Locus is essential.) I’m going to use Locus in conjunction with the Guide to Literary Agents and my own bookshelf (often the author will thank his agent on the first or last page), to make up a list of agents I think might be a good match for me. Then I’ll use the internet to confirm that said agents are open to queries and how they want to receive said queries.

I think that pinpointing a small handful of ideal agents is a better use of my time than just looking up everyone who reps fantasy and querying them all at once. After all, that’s how I approach the short story market- targeting the publication I think is most likely to buy my story first, rather than starting by submitting to The New Yorker or The Atlantic, as I know many beginning writers do, because they are supposedly “the best.”

I think the best agent, like the best market, is the one who is right for my story. For an agent, that means someone who will love it and fight for it. That’s what I want. So rather than papering all of New York with queries, I’m going to work hard to get my story in front of some very specific sets of eyeballs.

So, August. I will:

  • make a targeted agent list
  • draft my queries
  • write my synopsis

Also, to keep the good writing mojo going, I’m going to send out a pair of perfectly good short stories I’ve been sitting on for a while, and I’m going to write a third short story and send it out too. I find the more I have out in the marketplace, the better I feel about myself as a writer, even when I’m having one of those days where every time I sit down to write, something explodes five minutes later. Like yesterday. And the day before that.

And right now, as someone is knocking at my front door. Until next week, my friends.

When to Put the Pen Down and Back Up Again

As some of you know, I’m currently attempting to revise my first novel. I’m here to tell you I made a huge mistake.

I waited too long.

I’ve heard from countless sources that waiting to revise your manuscript after setting it down for a period of time allows you to approach it with fresh eyes. I believe this to be true. The amount of time that should be taken, however, varies greatly from person to person. A few of you might be able to wait a mere week or two before jumping back in. Others might do better to wait a month. Whichever person you might be, the main point is to eventually begin the project again.

I seemed to have forgotten that last bit.

To occupy my time getting “fresh eyes”, I started other projects. Projects that started as just a passing fancy. Projects I got drawn into. Projects that had me not thinking about previous projects I should have been getting back to.

Luckily I have The Amys who politely tapped me on the shoulder and demanded that I get back to the story they felt was worth getting revised. As convincing as they were, I still dragged me feet.

They tapped again. This time a little harder, maybe enough to leave a dime-sized bruise. I rewrote the first chapter. This appeased them for a time until they realized I wasn’t moving on to the next chapter. Now I fear a lynching is coming in the near future.

This is starting to sound more like a confession. Let me get back on track.

What every writer should learn is when to put down his or her pen, and when to pick it back up again.

Putting It Down

This is meant in several ways. First, know when to stop writing your story. Sure, in real life there are no endings, but your stories should have one. Find it, write it and put it down.

Another instance would be when you need to put down a current story to finish a previous one. This is good practice for a future career in writing. Do you think a publisher would mind if the book they’ve contracted you to write never gets revised because this new idea has taken you by storm? Think again. Put it down and learn follow through.

Pick It Up

As I’ve said, this one will be different for everyone. The trick is learning when to pick a story back up. If you pick it up too soon, you could be marveled by your own brilliance and refuse to change a word. If you wait too long (as in my case), you could be convinced it’s all crap or feel overwhelmed by trudging through such a huge volume of work (in case of the person who didn’t know when to stop).

Here’s something you can do (and something I wish I did). Once you put down the first draft, wait a week, two at most. The take a look at the first chapter. If you’re in the mind-set of it being perfection, put it back down for another week. Eventually you’ll come to it and see things you can improve on. That’s when you pick it back up again.

I’ll save for another post on what I’m doing to revise my MS and keeping The Amys at bay. Please feel free to throw down some advice of your own. I’d love to hear it.

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In Praise of Printing (and putting down the game controller)

I confess that abandoning my video game was a pretty darn good idea (Sorry Lightning!).

Lightning: That’s OK, I’ll just be over here punching this guy in the face until you get back.
Snow: I wear a trench coat to the beach!

Me (to Lightning): Excellent. Carry on.

In the month since I’ve last confessed about not writing, I’ve gotten the first draft of my final POV character arc completed and am almost finished with the revisions. While the rest of the country is grilling it up, having a few beers, and watching their local sports team assert their superiority over your local sports team, I’ll be wrapping up and doing my final print for edits. Always, always print your drafts, fellow writers. It’s crucial. You’ll be amazed at the errors, both in grammar and in logic, that your eyes skim over when you’re reading off the screen. Get involved with the Arbor Day Foundation and help plant some trees if you feel that bad about “wasting” paper. (That was serious, not sarcastic- I might be a treekiller but I’m also a treehugger.) Just don’t cheat your manuscript of a decent edit out of a misplaced sense of nobility.

Next I’ve got to:

1. send partials to a few beta readers
2. review my agent research and decide where my first round of queries is going
3. rewrite my query (ugh)
4. rewrite my synopsis (DOUBLE UGH)
5. start the heavy lifting on book 2

We’ll see how far I’ve gotten on the list at this time next month. In the meantime, I hope you all enjoy your holiday.

Get Your SMARTS About You

By S. C. Green

S. C. Green

Let’s talk goals for a minute here. Goals are something I’ve been taught is important to writing a good story. Each character that you have on the page needs to have one. Even if it’s just a walk on character, they must have purpose. Why are they there? What do they plan to achieve? So on and so forth. A goal gives them that final destination they’re striving to reach. That’s not to say it can’t change halfway through (given it’s a believable circumstance) or if it would ever be fully realized. Even the villains have goals, but do they always succeed? So throughout all of the careful planning of my own character’s goals, I forgot the most important goal of all.

My own.

Well, that’s not entirely true. I do have goals, but after thoughtful reflection, I’ve decided their more of the long-term-rather-general-and-vague variety. You probably already know what it is: To be a consistent Best Selling author. I want to one of those famous authors with initials in their name. You know the ones: J. R. R. Tolkien, J. K. Rowling, George R. R. Martin, and H. P. Lovecraft to name a few. That’s well and good, but that doesn’t give me the day-to-day objectives to get there.

So I scoured the webs for ideas. Let me tell you, there are plenty of them out there. The one I see popping up over and over again is the acronym SMART, which as old as it is, still is relevant and will be till the fall of man. Then the apes and cockroaches will take over and discover SMART and claim it as their own. Those damn dirty apes.

Here’s a breakdown:

S – Specific = Your goal has to be so to the point that if someone else was to read your goal, they would know exactly what you’re trying to accomplish.

M – Measurable = This is where you set the finish line. It should be a clear point to know that your goal is reached. In my case it would be a word or page count.

A – Achievable = This is where some people set themselves up for failure. If you set your goal too lofty, you won’t reach it. Then enters guilt and self-loathing to join you in a pity party. Make your goals small and attainable. Then over time make them bigger.

R – Relevant = No one else’s goal is right for you. Just because you have a friend that might be a prolific writer, doesn’t mean you need to set your goals to match theirs. Since this is your goal, it needs to come from you.

T – Time-bound = Break out the egg timer or stopwatch. You need to set a time limit on these goals. I suggest keeping them small. Daily increments. I wouldn’t go further than a week. The longer you give yourself, the higher the end game. The higher the end game is, the higher the chance to get overwhelmed.

There you have it. The internet has spoken. Of course there are variations out there. Some of which make the letters in the acronym redundant, but if they make sense to you, please use them. In the spirit of variation, I think I’ll add in one of my own. Something I think is important, but isn’t really covered.

S – Specific

M – Measurable

A – Achievable

R – Relevant

T – Time-bound

S – Support = I find that most (not all) people need some kind of support. That little bit of push from the outside to let us know what we’re doing is good or has merit.

Not everyone can get the support they need from the people they have in their lives. I’m lucky to not only have a supportive wife, but I also have a group of writing friends that know first-hand what I go through on a daily basis doing this writing gig. I share my goals with them and they help point out flimsy or unobtainable goals. They also help motivate me to reach those goals. I see them meet their goals, and I want to do the same. It’s not competition, but shared accomplishment.

Find support. Look for it in your community. Face-to-face support is always the best. Maybe there’s a class at a community college you could take. Check your local coffee shop. Most have a board where people post local events, including writing groups. Not one there? Post one yourself. Look for support online as well. There are a number of forums you can join. If you’re familiar with Twitter, search these hash tags: #amwriting and #writegoal. There you’ll find lots of other people doing the same as you. Be supportive of them and they’ll do the same for you.

So there you have it. I’ve got my SMARTS, now go get yours.

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Tools to Tame My Toddler Brain

By Amy K. Nichols

This week we’re talking about setting goals. On Monday, Amy McLane gave great advice about not biting off more than we can chew. I took her advice to heart when I sat down to write last night, and I set only one goal.

Keep my butt in the chair.

I mean this both physically and metaphorically. Keep my butt literally in the chair, and keep my mind focused on writing.

Writing for me has been difficult the last couple of weeks. I have lots of excuses: spring break, house guests, family responsibilities, large home improvement projects. But really, the truth is I’ve just been fickle about my writing. I’m at a place where I’m not sure what comes next in my WIP; and we all know it’s much easier to go work on no-brainer things than sit by yourself and listen for your characters’ whisperings.

Then, when I do sit down to write, I’m my own worst enemy. My brain betrays me at every step. I try to find the next sentence and my brain comes up with all kinds of shiny things to distract me. My brain is like a toddler being told to sit still in church, but squirms in her seat and chatters non-stop and eventually wiggles free and runs around the room laughing.

Parents learn quickly to take things along with them when they go out in public. Quiet activities to keep their kids entertained. Rewards for good behavior. Things they know will help ensure an enjoyable outing.

Last night when I sat down to write, I tried a similar strategy. I test-ran some tools to see if they could help me reach my Butt In Chair goal. These tools I used were:

If you haven’t tried Write or Die yet, definitely check it out. You can either use the free, online version, or pay $10 and download an install copy for your machine. I use Write or Die like jumper cables. It forces you to write a certain number of words within a certain amount of time. It definitely gets me over the starting line, regardless of where I am in my project.

If you’re working on a Mac, check out Freedom. It’s a program that blocks you from your internet access for the amount of time you specify. So while you’re working, you’re not hearing your email ping every time you get a new message. And when your brain gets antsy and whispers, “Go check Twitter” or “Google your topic so you really know what you’re talking about” or “Go watch that silly Youtube video” you can smile and simply say, “Sorry, can’t. No internet.” And keep writing. Brilliant. (If you’re not on a Mac, try turning off your computer’s internet connection and setting an egg timer.)

Raise your hand if you’re a fan of the good, old-fashioned list. Yep. Me, too. I make lists for everything. Last night I wrote a writing list. It didn’t relate to the plotting of my chapter; it related to the structure. I knew this chapter had a certain scene sequence. So I made a simple list of three scenes to check off as I wrote them.

Beside each item on the list I set a piece of chocolate. Go on and laugh; but I know some of you are seeing the logic here. Micro-rewards. They work for toddlers. They worked for my toddler brain. When I finished a scene, I got to eat a piece of chocolate. Little rewards to keep myself going. To keep my brain focused.

Guess what? The plan worked. I kept my butt in the chair. I reached my writing goal instead of squandering my time. Rock on.

Does your brain act like a squirming toddler when you sit down to write? Try treating it like a toddler. Give it boundaries, give it rewards and watch your word count increase.