I’m Open

Most years I have one or two books I’m absolutely can’t wait to get my hands on. A book that’s makes me retire early to bed just so I can get a few extra minutes flipping pages under my dim book light. Alas dear reader, this year is different.

There’s nothing on the “To Be Released Must Read” list this year. For one, my go-to author has not announced a book release this year (yet, I hope). And two, nothing has really caught my eye in the past year to make me mark my calendar.

I need to clarify that I’m still excited about books. I always have at least one on my bedside table and another cued up on my iPod. I’ve just found myself in a unique situation where the things I am currently reading either don’t have a follow-up book or I’m so far into the author’s backlog of novels, that I’ll have quite a while before I need to start vying for new content from them. So  I am excited about certain books to read this year. They just don’t happen to be waiting for release.

As for my go-to author, Jim Butcher. It’s been eleven years now that he’s published at least one new novel each year in his Dresden Files series. Two in 2010 if you include his collection of short stories in the same world. For a number of those years, he’s also produced a second or third novel. So it comes with a little disappointment that there is no official release date for his next novel. Although according to Wikipedia and his Livejournal blog (define stalking), the title of book fourteen in the Dresden Files is Cold Days. There’s also talk of a steampunk book he’s working on. I will say, however, if the man publishes a book, I’ll buy. Hardback. The week it’s released. No man-crush jokes.

So with the exception of a possible late release date from my go-to author, the rest of my reading time is open. Speaking of open, I’m open to suggestions. If you have any, please leave them in the comments below.

Trust me. You’re going to want to read this book.

Unless you’ve been living under a rock, you’ve heard about Harbinger, the YA psychological thriller debut by Sara Wilson Etienne.

Just in case, here’s the description from Amazon:

Girl, Interrupted meets Beautiful Creatures in this fast-paced thriller

When sixteen-year-old Faye arrives at Holbrook Academy, she doesn’t expect to find herself exactly where she needs to be. After years of strange waking visions and nightmares, her only comfort the bones of dead animals, Faye is afraid she’s going crazy. Fast.

But her first night at Holbrook, she feels strangely connected to the school and the island it sits on, like she’s come home. She’s even made her first real friends, but odd things keep happening to them. Every morning they wake on the floors of their dorm rooms with their hands stained red.

Faye knows she’s the reason, but what does it all mean? The handsome Kel tries to help her unravel the mystery, but Faye is certain she can’t trust him; in fact, he may be trying to kill her – and the rest of the world too.

Rich, compelling writing will keep the pages turning in this riveting and tautly told psychological thriller.

It’s one of several books I am excited to see published this year.

Now, in the spirit of transparency, Sara is a friend of mine. She’s also been a guest blogger here at the PLC. And she’s an all-around amazing person. Which is why I want to help spread the word about her book.

Harbinger will be released on February 2, 2012. Which is, like, a couple of days from now.

Trust me. You’re going to want to read this book.

If the book description and my gushing about Sara hasn’t convinced you, maybe her book trailer will:

And because now you’re sitting up in your seat and really paying attention, you should read this post from Sara’s blog and then watch the Behind the Scenes/Making of the Book Trailer video she created:

Finally, you should read this interview Sara gave over at The Compulsive Reader, and this one at Distraction 99 to read Sara’s own words about Harbinger, her writing process and  what obstacles she had to overcome to write it.

Congratulations, Sara!

Is You Is or Is You Ain’t Young Adult?

by Clay and Susan Griffith

Thank you for inviting us to contribute to this blog. There has been a lot of august company before us, so we hope we’ll have something interesting to say.

Here are 2 comments we got from different readers of our book The Greyfriar: Vampire Empire Book 1 via our blog and email.

1) I’m in the awkward between spot between teenage and adulthood so I’m not usually…one who will pick up an adult novel…. I wish I could find as many books in (the) adult genre as this that interests me.

2) (Y)our book is only for the teen audience – I am a 48 year young married guy – and enjoy(ed) the book thoroughly!

These two comments raise the question: Is The Greyfriar Adult or Young Adult?

And they raise the further question: Does it matter?

We didn’t write the Vampire Empire trilogy to be YA, or rather, we didn’t write it intending for it to be categorized as YA in bookstores. We did want it to be accessible to a wide scope of the reading public of all ages. We purposefully kept the violence level acceptable (no extreme gore) and the sex level to a minimum (i.e. no sex), although with strong romantic elements. We intended for it to be an adult book, but wanted teens to be able to enjoy it too. Since we have a background in comics, writing stories acceptable to a general audience comes natural to us.

When we found an agent, she never thought of The Greyfriar as YA. Our publisher (Pyr Books) never considered the Vampire Empire trilogy to be YA. In fact, at the time they bought the manuscript, they didn’t even publish YA (they do now). The trilogy was categorized as mainstream fantasy, and The Greyfriar was shelved in the adult sci-fi/fantasy section in bookstores. But soon after it went on sale last year, something interesting began to happen. We started to get glowing reviews on a lot of YA blogs, and we received lovely emails from teen readers saying how much they liked the book. This was unexpected, but not inexplicable. By happenstance, The Greyfriar included a lot of elements popular in YA books – fantasy, vampires, romance, dark futures, angsty heroes, and an adventurous female lead.

No matter what we intended, we were thrilled to be adopted by YA readers. Since we had become an honorary part of the YA revolution, we started to talk about why it was happening, and that made us think back to our own teen reading years (several decades ago!). Back then, there was no real “young adult” category for books. There were children’s books and adult books, and you moved from one to the other at some point in your teens. We were both voracious readers of sci-fi/fantasy and adventure, and the adult sections of the bookstores were full of titles we could enjoy. The fact that they were adult books didn’t mean they were full of gruesome violence or explicit sex, which would systematically deter younger readers.

These days, however, it seems it is necessary for books to have violence and sex to be considered “adult.” There are far fewer books now for a 13-year old to select from the adult shelf, or at least books that wouldn’t send shivers down the spine of a parent to know their kid was reading them. Like movies, over the last decades, any book meant for a mature audience seems to require content that would merit a PG-17 or R.

And so the “maturing” of the adult shelf created a hole in the book-reading market that YA came along to fill with compelling stories, interesting characters, and well-crafted prose, but light on the sex and gore. Many of today’s YA books would have been considered adult titles when we were teens, although likely the protagonists would’ve written as adults rather than teens.

So our experience with Vampire Empire indicates that novels which resonate with a young adult audience don’t have to be created specifically to be a YA novel. It’s tried and true advice in the writing game to write the book you want to write. Don’t worry (too much) about labels. Don’t latch onto the hot new trend because that trend will be played out by the time you finish your book, and you’ll have to shove that manuscript in a file cabinet and go hunting the next hot new trend. It will be very clear to an editor that your book is just a product to you, not a labor of love. And if you don’t love your book, why should an editor?

You can never completely predict or calculate what will find an audience, except good books. That trend almost always works. Find the book you want to write and stick to your plan; don’t panic (too much) as trends rise and fall. For example, in the time it took us to plan, plot, and write The Greyfriar, the vampire wave came and went…twice. And while we were working on the book, we certainly never expected it to grab a YA readership to the extent that many people would assume our novel was published as a YA book. We are, however, really glad it did. We LOVE our YA readership. They are enthusiastic and loyal. They love good stories and resonating characters, and they love to talk about books.

They remind us of us when we were teens wandering the aisles of our local bookstore looking for that next adventure. There were so many to choose from then – and there is today too.

Clay and Susan Griffith are a husband and wife writing team who are the authors of The Greyfriar: Vampire Empire Book 1, a rousing combination of fantasy, steampunk, pulp adventure, and romance. The Rift Walker: Vampire Empire Book 2 will be published in September 2011. 

Clay and Susan have also written comic books including The Tick (NEC Press), and the upcoming Allan Quatermain and It Came From Beneath the Sea…Again (both from Bluewater Comics).

3 Silver Linings in 2010

In creating this post, I’m finding it more of a lesson in finding the silver lining than any thing else. It’s been a rough year. Even so, there were moments that I found inspiring, rewarding, and just plain fun. So let me relive them here for you in hopes a washing away the less memorable times.

–ONE–

Books

I read a number of good books this year. I’ll list a few here in no particular order:

—-TWO—-

Conventions

This year I had the opportunity to go to two local conventions. The first, LepreCon 36, had me up close with the extremely talented James A. Owen, Charles Vess, and George R. R. Martin. I wrote about it in my other blog if you care to take a look.

I also somehow managed a free ticket to the Phoenix Comicon. I was pleasantly surprised at the size of the event. Again, I wrote about it in my other blog along with a short video I created of the event.

——THREE——

My Little Girl

Three days before Christmas, my little girl was born and all year long she has been a constant source of inspiration for me. In a way she helps me world build and character develop as I imagine what her life will hold for her, her triumphs and tribulations, and how I can help her along her chosen path. I’m also inspired to do my best to show her you can create a life worth living doing the things you love most.

I guess you could say that silver lining shone pretty bright for me. This exercise has put my year in a better perspective. Regardless, I’ll still be happy to usher it out. There’s a new year waiting to be had, and I’m rarin’ to get it going on a positive note.

So what was your year like? Anything of note that you’d like to share. We’d love to hear it.

3 Things to Toast from 2010

This week we’re reflecting on 2010 and how it impacted us as writers.

You know how when you’re playing Batman on Wii, and you step into the green goo, you lose all of your coins? Forgive me, but that’s how I feel, writing this post. Recent events have given me a kind of amnesia about anything prior to December 1st. Still, despite the goo, I’m able to think of three things that impacted me as a writer in 2010. Here they are.

1. Books

I love books. Big surprise there. Some of the books I read this year that impacted me as a writer include…

(There are a bunch more…and a few I’m reading right now…that are also awesome and I will write more about them another time…)

In 2011, I plan on reading a lot more, and a lot more outside of what I write. Reading outside the lines helps me become a better writer.

2. Liminal

I launched a literary journal for teens in September of this year. I’m working on getting the second issue ready for publication. It’s been an interesting endeavor, to say the least, and a lot more work than I expected. I have a new respect for editors and those making the decisions of what to publish and what to reject. Rejecting someone’s work is hard. Trust me. It’s kind of cool to have perspective from both sides: writer and editor. Most all, though, I have a new respect for submission guidelines.

Always read and abide by the submissions guidelines!

And please read Liminal. And tell your teenage writer friends to submit their work. Thanks.

3. My Writer Peeps

Where would I be without my writing community? This year has been a bit of a roller coaster, and my writer friends have been there to throw their hands up and scream with me.

Dear Writer Friends Whom I Love: Thank you for being the awesome friends you are. I am blessed that you are part of my life. ♥

So, here’s to 2010. *raises glass* And in 2011, may we all find lots of coins and not step in any green goo.

Cheers.

Three Things… That Rocked In 2010

This installment of Three Things… is a year end roundup. So here are Three Things… that rocked my socks in 2010.

1. Books: I read so many great books this year. My favorites:

The City and the City
China Miéville does Kafkaesque noir!
Palimpsest
Like reading underwater. The imagery stayed in my head for days.
Total Oblivion…More or Less
As smart as it is weird. And it is delightfully, relentlessly weird.
Assassin’s Apprentice

Yes, the cover of Assassin’s Apprentice is a bit of a Good Show, Sir! candidate, but it’s also a tightly plotted fantasy packed with fully-fleshed characters- the best high fantasy I’ve read this year. And bonus, the whole trilogy is already written, so no danger of Dance of Dragons style anguish.

Now, the observant will note that none of these books were actually released in 2010. I couldn’t buy many books this year because of moving house. Thus, I currently have a wish list a mile long. Right now, Tome of the Undergates and Behemoth are at the top. COUGHxmasCOUGH.

2. The 500 Club. I know I don’t get to play every week, but when I can play, I have so much fun with it. Having a word limit forces me to be thoughtful and concise, and it’s starting to show elsewhere in my writing. Ultimately, there’s something about the anything-goes vibe of the 500 Club that’s really freeing.

3. My local con, Leprecon. This year was the first time I attended my local SF/F con. George R. R. Martin and Charles Vess were the headlining guests, so it was a great first time. I wrote about it, and specifically GRRM’s panel, over at Smoldering Ink. I’ll definitely be attending Leprecon in 2011. Next year’s headliners are Sarah Monette and Elizabeth Bear, so if you like science fiction and fantasy and live in the greater Phoenix area, I hope to see you there.

The Occupational Hazard of Memoir Writing

by Alice Eve Cohen

STEP ONE:
Write your memoir…

STEP TWO:
Confess to your husband or __________ (fill in the blank: wife, friend, lover, doctor, parent, child, yogi, ex-boyfriend, masseur, etc, etc, etc) that you’ve just written a book about the most personal, private experience you’ve ever shared, and that you hope to publish it and share it with the whole wide world.

This is the most dangerous occupational hazard of writing memoir, and it must be approached delicately…as follows:

STEP 2A: FIND THE PERFECT MOMENT
I waited a long time for the right moment to tell my husband Michael about my book. The kids were at summer camp, and we were enjoying a rare, just-the-two-of-us vacation in Maine. The perfect moment finally arrived: A romantic evening, a glass of wine at the hotel restaurant, overlooking the moonlit bay:

“Michael, there’s something I need to tell you.

Maybe that wasn’t the best opening line. Michael’s look of adoration morphed to defensiveness, as he waited for me to continue.

“For the past year, I’ve been writing a book… about us…about our terrifying year.”

Long pause.

“You did what?! You wrote a book about our incredibly personal, and—I assumed, until now, private—family experience? I feel completely exposed!”
He slammed the wine glass on the table and walked out of the restaurant.

That didn’t go so well.

I understood why Michael felt exposed. What I Thought I Knew (Viking, 2009) is a memoir about my unexpected and terrifyingly pregnancy at the age of 44, fourteen years after being told I was infertile, a year before Michael and I were married. It was during an emergency CAT scan for an abdominal tumor that I discovered I was six months pregnant. Pretty personal stuff.

I sat at the table wondering how I’d managed to wreck the closest moment we’d shared in years. Finally, I paid for our drinks and went up to our hotel room.
“It’s not just that I feel exposed,” said Michael, as soon as I opened the door. “I feel usurped! Until tonight, I thought this was our family’s story. It’s no longer ours. It’s your story. My experience—the most difficult and the most important experience of my life—which I used to think was as important as yours, will be irrelevant.”

I knew that once he read it, he’d understand that at the heart of this book about our family crisis was a love letter to my family.

STEP 2B: GET HIM/HER TO READ YOUR BOOK
I finished the first full draft of my book that September, and asked Michael if he would read it.

“Put a copy on my desk.”

The manuscript sat on Michael’s desk, untouched, all fall. I replaced it every few weeks with new drafts.

“Please read it,” I implored him, when I signed with an agent in January.

“Put a copy on my desk.”

“Michael, it’s been on your desk for five months!”

Two weeks later, my agent had lined up several interested publishers, and scheduled an auction date.

“Michael, you have to read it! This is your last chance to vet the book. I can change anything you want me to, but not after it’s sold.”

The next morning, Michael climbed sleepily into bed as I was getting up.

“I read your book overnight, Alice. Good job.” He closed his eyes.

“Good job? Wait, don’t go to sleep yet.”

“Okay, okay,” he yawned. “I have to admit, it wasn’t as hard to read as I thought it would be. But… I come across as really bland! You made me this boring, saintly guy. That’s not me. I think I’m a lot more interesting than I sound in your book. Now I’m really tired. I have to sleep.”

With Michael’s help, and with Viking’s blessings, I added his imperfections. Ultimately, Michael became very supportive of the book, though in some ways we’re still dealing with the aftershock of our very personal story becoming so public. From time to time, he gently suggests that writing fiction might be more fun.

Despite the occupational hazards, I continue to write memoir. In fact, I’m in the middle of writing a new memoir. I just have to find the perfect moment to tell Michael about it.

Alice Eve Cohen is a solo theatre artist, playwright, and memoirist. Her memoir, What I Thought I Knew (Viking, 2009) won the Elle’s Lettres 2009 Grand Prix for Nonfiction, it was selected as one of Oprah Magazine’s 25 Best Books of Summer, and has been optioned for a television movie by Lifetime. She has written for Nickelodeon, PBS, and CBS. Her plays have been presented at theatres throughout the country, and she has toured her solo theatre works internationally. Her writing about arts in education has been published in nine languages. The recipient of fellowships and grants from the New York State Council on the Arts and the National Endowment for the Arts, she holds a BA from Princeton University and an MFA from The New School. She teaches at The New School in New York City.

www.aliceevecohen.com
www.twitter.com/aliceevecohen

My Space

This week at the PLC, we’re showing off our writing spaces.

When I told my husband that was our topic this week, he responded, “Should I take a pic of you on the couch?” I laughed, but it’s true. I do a lot of my writing late at night, sitting on my couch with my laptop and headphones, with my feet propped on the coffee table.

I could also post a picture of my bedroom floor, where I sometimes spread out all of my notes and sit cross-legged among them to work.

But instead I’ll show you my office. It’s the place I prefer to work, but it doesn’t have a door. And that can be a problem since it’s located across from the playroom.

Just before you walk into the office, you pass the poster from the 1996 RSC season’s Macbeth. It’s creepy — especially at night after I turn off the light and have to walk down the dark hallway — but I like to think of it as a kind of gargoyle who frightens away resistance so I can work in peace.

bubble bubble toil and trouble

On the wall behind my desk are three of my charcoal sketches of The Winged Victory. I keep the charcoals in my desk drawer and work on the sketches sometimes when I’m brainstorming.

Winged Victory

And this is a pic of my actual writing area.

where I write

I’ve surrounded myself with the things that inspire me. Quotes and pictures and books and trinkets and gifts from friends.

books on writing

I also keep some encouraging words I received during a manuscript consult tacked to the wall in front of me as I write. Helps keeps me going on those difficult no-words days.

encouraging

As I type this post, my dog is laying at my feet under my desk, and the floor is littered with the holes from my hole punch. Last week, one of the kiddos thought it would be fun to make it “snow” in mommy’s office. I still haven’t cleaned them up yet.

I also frequently find my office invaded by army men, legos, dollies, and a wide arrange of stuffed animals. I work around the toys until they start to overwhelm me. Then we have a “pick up mommy’s office” party, which the kids hate but makes my brain feel a lot less cluttered. This morning, my kiddo brought me spiders and frogs.

spiders and legos and frogs, oh my!

And finally, there’s my blue board, where my daughter likes to draw me pictures and encouraging messages like, “Good job Amy xoxo I {heart} you”. Is there anything more awesome than that?

encouragement

Now it’s time for me to get back to work. I have a lot of information to process after the SCBWI conference this weekend and I’m itching to get back to writing.

I’ll leave the light on so the creepy Macbeth poster doesn’t frighten you as you walk back down the hallway. Thanks for stopping by!

You Mean I Have To Sell T-Shirts?: Richard Nash, The Candide of Publishing, and the Glorious Future Ahead

Reading IS fun!!!

By: Michael James Greenwald

Welcome to the Sunday confession on PLC, People!

This week, we’re talking about self-publishing.

YIKES!

I know.

To be honest, I know very little about the industry of publishing.  My wealth of knowledge may eclipse some of you out there, but more than likely most of you are more versed than I.

You might be thinking: great, Doofus, so how did you get a blog, again?

And the answer would be: I paid Amy Nichols 500 buckeroos!

This morning, I was made aware that Bob Edwards, of “Bob Edwards Weekend” on NPR, was doing a three-part series called: The Future of Book Publishing.  In the first part of the series, Bob interviews Richard Nash, former publisher of the independent Soft Skull Press from 2001-2009 and founder of the new social publishing house Cursor.

The Candide of Publishing

I just finished listening to the interview, and have to say, I’ve never felt more excited about the future of publishing!

I urge you to purchase for $2.95 the interview in it’s entirety here.

But I’ll provide the Sportscenter, news-crawl highlights.

Nash’s platform for the future of publishing (and his rationale for the publishing industry’s decline) centers on what he refers to as the writer-reader connection business, which is analogous to the publishing version of eharmony.

“Books are…tremendously idiosyncratic,” Nash says.  ”Unlike a half hour sitcom where everybody laughs at the same three jokes, they’re fifteen hours of one other person’s voice inside your head.  [Publishers] need to have a fine tune sense of the idiosyncrasies of a writer and the idiosyncrasies of a reader to make that matchmaking.”

That's Borders and B&N on the top. Bye, bye!

This week, my fellow confessioners have been talking about self-publishing.  Nash’s vision of the future publishing marketplace involves an annihilation of the out-of-touch, dystopian publishing structure that exists now; a hammering away and eventually chipping off of the top tier of the publishing industry pyramid.  This begins (or has already begun) with the failed state of chain retail book-sellers.

“Borders and Barnes and Noble,” Nash says, “basically they’re going to go out of business.  The Internet is going kill the chains, because all the chains offer is selection and the Internet can offer selection.  And that will create the space…for the Independent booksellers.”

Nash’s vision of the futurama publishing industry involves boutique booksellers in your neighborhood being, “really, really good at what they do.”

And what that consists of is, “not just selling books published by publishers, but running literary workshops, running cooking workshops centered around cookbooks and as with the case of a couple interesting booksellers, becoming publishers themselves, offering marketing resources to self-published authors.”

His vision does center around the Internet.

“The Internet in a certain sense,” he says, “is getting rid of the very kind of narrow, uniform, blockbuster, mass-market aspect of things, giving us the opportunity to restore a more artisanal and idiosyncratic way of connecting with one another.”

The prime example of this idea is his online social publishing website Cursor, which could become the Facebook for writers and readers (Bookface, anyone?), creating communities of writers and readers.

“The book is a conversation,” Nash says.  ”And that conversation creates an enormous amount of cultural value, and what [Cursor] is focused on is trying to gather all that value for the writer.”

Nash says he foresees the publishing industry copying the model laid out by Hollywood studios, where the big publishers, the ones that remain after some of the Big Six Publishers are lopped off the pyramid, will publish very few books, 200-500 a year, and they’ll focus all their budgets on marketing those books.  It stands to reason that most of the 2-500 will be established authors, like James Patterson, Stephen King, Jodi Piccoult, due to the fact it costs precipitously less to market existing authors than new.

The positive of this though, is that Nash expects the whole rest of the market to be made up of hundreds of thousands of small presses, who will publish,”a much more interesting and diverse set of writers.  The people who are referred to as mid-list writers that may only sell five or ten thousand copies, maybe only sell two thousand copies, but change the lives of the people who read their books.  [Writers] who are also teaching…who can connect in the future with their readers in ways that…look a little bit more like singer-songwriters.”

Nash says many writers approach him, throw their hands in the air, and complain,

Wait, you mean I have to sell t-shirts?!?

And those writers, Nash points out, will be, like sing-songwriters have been since inception, required, in some sense, to sing for their supper.

But he does provide us with five songs to sing.

1) Participate in your community

2) Publish in literary journals

3) Go to readings

4) Hang out in bookstores

5) Get to know other writers

About his five suggestions, Nash realizes writers will, “do them in part for the sake of serendipity, because maybe you’ll meet an agent or an editor through that particular process.”

But then he zeroes in on the future reality of publishing, and it’s not a type of publishing, self or POD or traditional, it’s a mindset, a philosophy, that needs to be changed; because after so many years of publishing the same way, top-down, the writer solely responsible for creating the widget for the big publisher to publish, package, ship, and market, writers must realize we’ve been conditioned to think a certain way, which sacrifices our individuality and sheds our artifice in the face of the pressure to push units, to sell.  In the end, books and reading is about connectivity, expression–a story-telling instinct that has been a part of the human fabric before paper and pens.

“The real reason you’re doing,” Nash explains, “is that it will make your happier to be part of the community of writers and serious readers.  That’s the end.  We’re looking to be read, to be recognized, to connect to people. Figuring out how to “monopize” that is the second part of that.  But if you can figure out how to be happy, that’s what really counts.”

I wish good words to y’all.

–MJG

When not clinging to every damn word that comes from Richard Nash’s lips, Michael James Greenwald is a student at Story Studio Chicago, applying for a Ragdale Residency in the fall, and considering allowing UT, Austin a second chance at deliverance (Corporate-sponsored education institutions here I come!!!), by accepting him into their MFA program for 2011 (HOOK ‘EM HORNS!!).

For now, he works in his family business of owning and operating bowling alleys in the South Suburbs of Chicago. He is also a fiction writer, with a short story collection Stories from a Bowling Alley and a novel The Rainbow Child due to be published in the next several years. You can read his blogs at sleepsunshine and his confessions every Sunday on his group blog at parkinglotconfessional.com. Venture to his Facebook page or feel free to email him with any comments or suggestions for further topics, or if you had any interest in being a guest blogger on either one of his sites.

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There’s Editing…And Then There’s Editing

By Amy K. Nichols

This week at The Parking Lot Confessional we’re taking on that hot potato topic. You know the one.

Self-publishing.

(Dun-dun-Duhhhhhhhhhn)

Like the rest of you, I’ve been trying to keep up with all of the changes in the publishing industry. It’s enough to make you dizzy: ebooks and indies and models and pricing and markets and Big Six and Lulu and on and on and on.

If there’s one thing I’m holding onto in the midst of it all, it’s this:

People want to read good books.

Therefore…

Writers need to write good books.

I know, it’s not rocket science. But this is where things get sticky.

We writers love what we write. We coddle our novels and purr over them and think they’re oh-so-precious. We show them off to our writers groups, confident they’ll see our brilliance; but always ready with an explanation if they say that one part doesn’t quite work or a justification if they object to our using that worn-out stereotype.

If we’re really gutsy, we’ve found a couple of trusted readers who will be brutal with our work. Readers who will tell us our babies are ugly. Readers who will point out that our darling has three mouths and a foot growing out of the top of its head and that dressing it up in a pink tutu isn’t helping.

Regardless if we send our precious off to be traditionally published, or if we get accepted by an independent press or if we create our own publishing company and print our own book, one thing remains true:

Our work must be edited.

Must. As in, not optional.

What a lot of people don’t understand is there are (at least) two kinds of editing:

  • Line editing
  • Content editing

Line editing looks like this:

Wendy ran into the lake until the water reached her waste waist.

Content editing looks something like this:

Wendy watched him pull out of the driveway, still feeling his kiss on her lips. She let the sensation linger, knowing she’d never feel his kiss again. She went to the kitchen and made herself a cup of tea. [Why did she let him leave? She made a cup of tea? That's it? This is completely out of her character and not believable.]

Most people know how to line edit. Not everyone knows how to edit content.

Enter the professional editor.

When you work with a professional, she’ll not only catch your word mishaps (waste vs. waist), she’ll also catch your content mishaps. The holes in your plot. The wobble in your pacing. The inconsistencies in your narrative voice.

You need an experienced and impartial third-party to punch holes in your book and see if it still floats. Again, not optional…unless you want your book to sink (stink?).

Back to self-publishing.

Every self-published book I’ve read — with the exception of one — lacked good content editing. I’m not talking typos here. I’m talking confusing jumps in the narrative, unbelievable plot contrivances, inconsistent narrative voice, flat characters. Things that should have been weeded out in rewrites.

Why would anyone publish a book with such obvious mistakes? My guess is authors A) think they can edit their own work, B) don’t want to pay editing fees, or C) both.

If I have one thing to say about self-publishing, it’s this:

If you want your book to be good, don’t edit it yourself.

We love our babies. We don’t see their flaws. We know our stories too well and we fill in gaps without realizing it.

Hire a professional editor.

Not a member of your writing group. Not your cousin (unless he’s a seasoned pro). Hire a professional who is unfamiliar with your work and will read it with objective eyes.

OK, I take it back. I have two things to say about self-publishing. The second is this:

Trust your editor.

I once edited a book for a self-publishing author. The book was nowhere near ready for publication when I started editing it. The author and I had worked through three drafts when she announced the book was to be published the following Tuesday. Zoinks?! This was news to me. The work still wasn’t ready and I told her so. She said we were done editing and sent it off to be printed.

She should have listened to me. It wasn’t ready.

People want to read good books. If your book is confusing or wobbly or inconsistent or just poorly written, your readers are going to notice. They’re going to put your book down and read something else.

Why squander your work? Hire an editor. If she says the book isn’t ready, the book isn’t ready. Keep working on it. Make it the best book it can be.

There is only goodness to be gained from patient and thorough editing.